tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4338885932288953334.post9029791398521802284..comments2023-06-12T02:17:46.358-07:00Comments on One Foot in the Gutter: My first college writing assignmentRiki Rachtmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03046015357277576229noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4338885932288953334.post-24900070437246807272013-09-23T02:03:41.507-07:002013-09-23T02:03:41.507-07:00i trully enjoy all your blog as well as your diffe...i trully enjoy all your blog as well as your different point is really good.very thanks. <br />website development companyhttp://www.zinavo.conoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4338885932288953334.post-58987127136549354302011-06-20T03:51:56.134-07:002011-06-20T03:51:56.134-07:00An essay can do this in many different ways such a...An essay can do this in many different ways such as exploring a topic in depth, construct a clear and strong argument. A persuasive essay on the purpose and structure of essays will be written from scratch, so you do not have to worry about its originality. <br /><br /><a href="http://www.topqualityessays.com/" rel="nofollow">Thesis Help </a>emilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17052561814645395188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4338885932288953334.post-50414924342603635542011-06-09T13:20:37.485-07:002011-06-09T13:20:37.485-07:00Gripping. Sure, there are grammar and syntax issue...Gripping. Sure, there are grammar and syntax issues, but that's what editors are for. You built the tension and captured both the emotions of the situation and your audience. I wanted to know more. It's always a good thing if your reader finishes and says "Well, what happened next?"Janine Cloud https://www.blogger.com/profile/02177947059351723896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4338885932288953334.post-22091479389547977172011-04-13T12:28:42.280-07:002011-04-13T12:28:42.280-07:00Riki,
The fact that you didn't "have to&q...Riki,<br />The fact that you didn't "have to" do that homework assignment (but you did it anyway) means that this writing class is the perfect place for you right now! Glad to hear that you are really getting into it! Keep up the good work, man. Lots of us out here in cyberland are proud of you for following your dreams.Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13354507038596788010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4338885932288953334.post-46235407634056231282011-04-11T18:10:58.987-07:002011-04-11T18:10:58.987-07:00I read your posts on Twitter about Voodoo and was ...I read your posts on Twitter about Voodoo and was so sad for you. However; here, where you've shared the story in such alive and moment to moment detail...wow...I saw it all happening as if I was right next to you. I'm sorry for your loss. Losing something that loves you unconditionally, it's devastating. You were very lucky to have him and he you.<br /><br />Great job with the assignment. Please keep this up!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4338885932288953334.post-35967909268847173892011-04-07T11:50:33.960-07:002011-04-07T11:50:33.960-07:00Very descriptive. I've never been to Californ...Very descriptive. I've never been to California but I could get a very good picture in my mind's eye of the surroundings. I'm sorry about Voodoo, it's hard losing someone you love.<br /><br />Keep writing, you're doing well.Barbaranoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4338885932288953334.post-84322880599164528592011-04-07T11:29:02.026-07:002011-04-07T11:29:02.026-07:00christ, Riki, that made me cry. when it started, i...christ, Riki, that made me cry. when it started, i had no clue where it was going to go. when you brought Voodoo into the story, my heart sank. and the last paragraph, and the way it tied into the first paragraph (where we're all ignorant of the tragic ending) is like a punch to the gut.heatherbathttp://www.twitter.com/heatherbatnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4338885932288953334.post-58249250407469344902011-04-07T09:49:17.256-07:002011-04-07T09:49:17.256-07:00Great writing man, felt like I could see it unfold...Great writing man, felt like I could see it unfolding. Sending good vibes to you and yours, you never know when Voodoo might show back up.@evilbankshttp://twitter.com/evilbanksnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4338885932288953334.post-90600625262185961872011-04-07T08:06:14.165-07:002011-04-07T08:06:14.165-07:00Riki that almost made me cry! You recounted the ev...Riki that almost made me cry! You recounted the event in vivid detail. Grammar/puncuation lack, but it was not lacking on heart and feelings! It is a very good recounting of one of the most terrible days of your life, it must have been very tough to put down on paper.Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07169541591122971290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4338885932288953334.post-78468206663143704892011-04-07T07:45:43.565-07:002011-04-07T07:45:43.565-07:00Very well written Riki, I love your play with word...Very well written Riki, I love your play with words and your discriptions of the area. I am so sorry about VooDoo I hope he finds his way back to you. <br />I too had a great disintrest in HS was glad I graduated got out and never had to go back. <br />You have a gift so you should pursue your dreams of writing. I could see myself buying one of your books on The seedy side of Hollywood.(fiction of course) Thanks for Sharing. joAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4338885932288953334.post-80860734710710170662011-04-07T07:22:35.770-07:002011-04-07T07:22:35.770-07:00Riki, I really admire you putting that out here fo...Riki, I really admire you putting that out here for all of us to read. <br /><br />Secondly, I love what you've done in your assignment. You are far more creative and talented than you give yourself credit for. <br /><br />Well done! I really enjoyed reading this!!Aprilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00542305790703313104noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4338885932288953334.post-57357513682440993892011-04-07T07:19:19.467-07:002011-04-07T07:19:19.467-07:00good verbal visualization,really brought a more vi...good verbal visualization,really brought a more vivid interpretation of a morning routine.Good stuff,this is the start of your writing journey,don't be afraid of throwing more thoughts out.Have a good one!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4338885932288953334.post-57443985791011735342011-04-06T20:34:39.651-07:002011-04-06T20:34:39.651-07:00poor voodoo was so scared. :(poor voodoo was so scared. :(Heathernoreply@blogger.com